Original version:
- What type of flavor do you want, if you need to drink such liquid products?
Suggested version:
- What flavor would you like if you needed to drink such liquid products?
Notes:
A. The phrase "type of flavor" is redundant. The term "flavor" is enough.
B. The conditional question using "if" needs to include "would" instead of "do."
C. In a conditional question, I suggest using "would you prefer" or "would you like" instead of "would you want."
Original version:
-If you require nursing care, are you interest in more flavor options?
Suggested version:
- If you required nursing care, would you be interested in more flavors?
Notes:
A: The phrase "flavor options" seems redundant. Just "more flavors" is sufficient.
B. The second conditional question referring to a future event that uses "if" needs to have the verb "require" in the past subjunctive.
More details regarding the conditional sentence can be found at Wikipedia2 and Section 5.114 Mood in chapter 5 of the Chicago Manual of Style.3
1. Nikkei.com: http://www.nni.nikkei.co.jp/e/ac/TNKS/Nni20090623DA3J6231.htm
2. Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conditional_sentence
3. The Chicago Manual of Style Online (subscription required): http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/ch05/ch05_sec114.html
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