2008-06-24

Skipping Class?

What should you say if you need to skip or cancel your class at ANMI Eikaiwa? Let's take a look at a recent email I received from a new student:

こんばんは。
急用のため、本日お休みいたします。
また、来週よろしくお願いたします。

First, we need to choose a good subject (件名) line. Here are a few ideas:
  • Notice of Absence (欠席の知らせ)
  • Notice of Cancellation (キャンセルの知らせ)
Second, we need to make a greeting (挨拶). To a customer or boss use this style:
  • Dear Mr. Suzuki:
  • Dear Mrs. Jones:
  • Dear Ms. Keiko Matsuda:
  • Dear Professor Watanabe:
  • Dear Dr. Sorensen:
When sending email to a friend, family member, or if you are the customer, use this style:
  • Dear Chip,
  • Dear Chikako,
  • Dear MasterCard Customer Support,
  • Dear Family,
  • Dear Friends,
One point! There is NO space between the last letter and a colon or comma.

Third, let's make some sample text for your email.
  • Good morning. (おはようございます。)
  • Good afternoon. (こんにちは。)
  • Good evening. (こんばんは。)
  • I had a sudden change of plans. (急用のため、本日お休みいたします。)
  • I am not feeling well today. (ちょっと調子が悪い。)
  • I have to work overtime tonight. (今晩、残業がある。)
  • So, I have to cancel my class tonight. (だから、私は今晩クラスをキャンセルします。)
  • So, I cannot attend my class tonight. (だから、私は今晩欠席します。)
  • I will see you in class next week. (また、来週よろしくお願いたします。)
  • I will send email to reschedule my next class. (次回のレッスンの予約をメールでします。)
Finally, we need to provide a closing. There are many options to choose from. Here are some examples:
  • Sincerely,
  • Best regards,
  • Yours sincerely,
  • Sincerely yours,
  • Thank you,
Point: Be sure to only capitalize the first word and to add a comma at the end.

Last, add your name or full name if appropriate. It is also a good idea to add your contact information. For example:

Example 1.
Chip
support@anmi-eikaiwa.com
045-841-4218
Example 2.
Chip Sorensen

アンミ英会話教室
Tel 045-841-4218
Fax 045-841-4288
support@anmi-eikaiwa.com
P.C.サイト: http://www.anmi-eikaiwa.com/
携帯サイト: http://www.anmiweb.com/mobile/
Here is the final version of the following Japanese:
こんばんは。
急用のため、本日お休みいたします。
また、来週よろしくお願いたします。
Subject: Notice of Absence

Dear Chip,

Good evening. I had a sudden change of plans. So, I cannot attend my class tonight. I will see you in class next week.

Best regards,

Taro Suzuki
090-XXXX-XXXX
taro.suzuki@anmi-eikaiwa.com

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アンミ英会話教室
234-0053神奈川県横浜市港南区日野中央2-6-3
パークサイド日野102号
http://www.anmi-eikaiwa.com/ | support@anmi-eikaiwa.com
Tel. 045-841-4218 | Fax 045-841-4288
携帯リンク http://www.anmiweb.com/mobile/

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